This is the first historical video by İnsaf and Çiğdem from section 3.
http://video.google.com/videoplay?docid=-843791984330722853&q=%C3%A7%C4%9Fdm+and+nsf&total=1&start=0&num=10&so=0&type=search&plindex=0
This is the second historical video by Dilber and Kader from section 3.
http://video.google.com/videoplay?docid=-9149830520335093342&q=kader+and+dilber&total=1&start=0&num=10&so=0&type=search&plindex=0
This is the third historical video by Emine and Pınar Ç.from section 3.
http://video.google.com/videoplay?docid=3780616712180103653&q=emine+and+p%C4%B1nar&total=8&start=0&num=10&so=0&type=search&plindex=1
42 comments:
çiğdem and insaf: the topic you chose is really interesting. It can easily attract one's atention. the music is nice and your voice is soft. ıt is obvious that the words were chosen carefully.but there are some words mispronunced such as "civilization". generally it is a good job. thanks...
kader and dilber: girls, I didn't know anything about the place you told about and I learnt many things thanks to you. your pronunciation was good, but there were some mistakes such as "century". kader's intonation is good, but dilber, you should take btreath while talking. thanks friens...
emine and pınar: the video could be better if you gave more information. I wish we could see you.lastly you finished it suddenly. thanks..
ümmehan
İNSAF&ÇİĞDEM: Guys, you spoke fluently like native speakers. I enjoyed your video. Your topic was related to the videos we watched last week. Also, it was clear that you paid more attention to intonation. Congratulations!
KADER&DİLBER: Guys, in general, you prepared a good video. Your grammar, intonation were better than expected.
EMİNE&PINAR: Guys, I liked your video as well. But it could have been better at some points.(Ali Uztopal)
İnsaf Çiğdem: Great pronunciation. But I think there is a mistake in pronunciation of "civilization" Good topic and enough information about it.thnx
Kader Dilber: Good pronunciation Kader Your voice is really soft and smooth. But Dilber you have breaks between words not between sentences so I had difficulty in undersatanding whether you finish or continue your speech. Again good topic.thanx
Emine Pınar: Girls your video is good in terms of topic but I wish I had seen your faces for a while. Pınar you mispronunce the word "castle" and I didn't watch a historical program which starts with " I'll tell you sth about..." I think the way you begin doesn't show the nature of that kind of program. thnx
Nahide Koca ide106_2
İnsaf%Çiğdem: You spoke fluently like native speakers, but I think there is a mistake in pronunciation of "civilization." The music is nice and your voice is soft.
Dilber&Kader: Your pronunciation was good, but there were some ptonunciation mistakes such as "century". Kader's intonation is good, but dilber should take breath while talking. Good topic. Thanx :)
Emine&Pınar: Your topic was good. You mispronunced the word "castle." The way you begin didn't show the nature of that kind of program. And also you finished it suddenly.
çiğdem & insaf:You spoke in a smooth and soft way. Your topic is inviting. Giving information about it by showing the pictures is appropriate for the nature of program.
kader & dilber: girls, you chose an effective topic. You didn't make any grammatical mistakes. Your intonation is good, especially kader
pınar & emine: Your topic is good,but you made some pronunciation mistakes. Some points aren't suitable for the nature of the program,but good job:) (sezen)
kader& dilber: girls, your topic is inviting and it is obvious that you paid attention to your pronunciation and intonation. good job. thnx
emine&pınar: friends, you did a good job in terms of pronunciation and intonation, but it was better if you hadn't introduced yourself. it is not related to nature of our topic.
guys, you all said we are wrong while pronouncing 'civilization', so I checked it up. it is pronounced differently in british english and american english,and we pronounced it in american english, so ı think there is no mistake. please check it up again. thanks for your feedback
for insaf and çiğdem... you are good your pronunciation and speech tone is also good... good luck thanks...
for dilber and kader...be careful about the pronunciation of "muslim"it must be "mazlım" one of your intonation is good but the other one is not good so,there is incompatibility... thanks good luck..
for emine and pınar... be careful about the pronunciation "pray" and it is not necessary to say "foreign tourists" "tourists" are foreign people... thanks but you should improvw your sentence intonation...good luck...
yasmin abdulkerim ide 106-02:
insaf,çiğdem:
you are very good in intonation ,fluency and pronunciation.
kader,dilber:
it was a good job but you could find a better place than a bedroom ı think.
pınar,emine:
it was wrong to say' say something about' in such a programme.your fluency could be better.
ide106-2 Feriha Gürbüz
For all groups: Friends your speeches are generally good, you talk fluently...But here is a problem that you dont pay attention to the location you record ur videos, and all videos are picture slides, ur topics are attracting but anyway u could visit somewhere else and catch the attention of audience...Thx...
insaf and çiğdem: they spoke so fluently and they paid attention to the nature of this type of programmes. that was a really good video.Congratulations!
dilber and kader: their video is also good in terms of grammar usage and pronuncation. however,they should improve intonation.Congratulations!
pınar and emine: their video was good. it would have been better if they hadn't said their names,however. congratulations!
Aytün Türkmen ide106_01
For çiğdem amd İnsaf: hi friends.I liked your video.You are reaaly successful.It is a good example of historical program.your sentence intonation,and fluency is good.thanks..
For Kader and Dilber: Your video was informative for me.you should pay attention to pronunciation.you could improve yourselves.but generally you are successful.thanks friends..
For Emine and Pınar: It is a good video.But there are some points you should be careful.You should pay attention to beginning and end of the video.There are some pronunciation mistakes.It is suitable for a historical program.Thanks friends..
ezgi uluc ide106_1
insaf and cigdem: the words, phrases and your speech & your music is appropriate for this type of program and in a harmony. your sentence intonation is good. your topic is attractive,congratulations...
kader and dilber:
it seems that you studied for pronunciations (except for a few small mistakes) and sentence intonation thanks.
pınar and emine:
ı wish we could see u and u used the right phrases for this kind of program. despite these mistakes, your sentence intonaation is good.thanks
volkan tayiz
generally your videos were good.ıt was obvıous that you did your best
I could note encounter a big mistake in terms of grammer pronunciation but there was not great harmony between your speech and your photos chosen for the activity
_insaf & Çigdem: This is good because you worked hard for it especially searching and practicing. It is obvious. Thanx
_Dilber & Kader : The video is good but you could use some pausing in the speech.
_Emine & Pınar Ç: The visual aids are ok, but it is like fast work.. Intonation is necessary because you are goibg a place which is important for history and people
İnsaf and Çiğdem:Hi, girls!I liked your video.I think your pronunciation and grammar are good.The topic you chose is interesting.You did a good job.Thanks...
Kader and Dilber:Generally, it's a good video.Your pronunciation is good.Dilber should pay attention to intonation.
Emine and Pınar:The topic you chose is good.Your pronunciation is good generally.It would have been better if you hadn't introduced yourself.It doesn't sound good.
okan uzgörmez ide106-2
for insaf and cigdem,
your video is very good, your sentence intonation is well done, no pronunciation mistake.
for kader and dilber,
your pronunciation is very well, but your sentence intonation could be improved.
for emine and pınar,
you could use sentence intonation more effectively, no pronunciation mistake.
FATMA KOMURCU IDE106_01;
FOR INSAF AND CIGDEM;
They are well-prepared.the content is interesting.they presented the program well.their pronunciation is good.thanks.
FOR DILBER AND KADER;
they seem very passive.however,they speak fluently.they make a good explanation.thanks..
EMINE AND PINAR;
their sentence intonation is good and they are careful about the pronunciation.ıf they had appeared at lest in a small part of the video,it would be better.thanks...
İNSAF&ÇİĞDEM:I think you have a good pronunciation. but your intonation is not so good.apart from that everything was OK
EMINE AND PINAR; you have a good pronunciation but you should improve your intonation
FOr DILBER AND KADER:there were some pronunciation mistakes such as chritianity,period,church. you should pay attention to them.(MUHİTTİN)
For İnsaf and Çiğdem:The history of Maya is well-chosen your video is generally informative and the way you read the passages is impressive. I congratulate you for giving so much detail about Mayas but i suppose i could not any relation between the given information and pictures. While mentioning the hierarchal regime of Mayas, some statues pass on the screen. I believe you did your best. Thank you for all your work. Gulbin.
For Emine and Pınar Ç.: Guys Balıklı Göl is a mysterious and appealing chose to introduce but i suppose at the beginning of a program you had better not use 'I will say something about Şanlıurfa' because it is not a formal usage. While mentioning the history of fishes in the lake you have put some pictures related to it, that's nice. You did yoru best i believe. Thank you for all your work. Gulbin.
Yelda Suiçmez ide106_01
for insaf and çiğdm's video:
insaf must be more careful about the sentence intnatıons and pronunciations.'chaacteristic' was pronunced ın a wrong way by insaf.çiğdem was successful ın pronunciation an sentence intonatıons.your subject was interestıng and educative.thanks friends your performance.
Yelda Suiçmez
for dilber and kader's video:
there wre some pronunciatıon mıstakes such as'muslim and century'.but thanks to your video I have learned lots of new pronunciatıons of words I dont know.thanks for tis.sentence ıntonations were generally good.T he place chosen for video(bedroom) was creative:)thanks friends.
Yelda Suiçmez:
Emine and pınar's video:
you were successful in pronunciation and sentence intonatıons.I wish we had seen you because you said 'my friend emine will ........'these usages were not obvious. ıf you had acted in these parts, ıt could have been more successful, I thınk.thanks frıends your video.I have learned the hıstory of balıklı göl thanks to you.
insaf and çigdem: your video is very good.ı liked it very much.the music is good.I think your intonation and pronunciation are also good.thnx:)
emine and pınar:your topic and video are good.there is no pronunciation mistake.I think you did your best.thnx:)
dilber and kader:the video is generally good except some pronunciation mistakes.sentence intonation is also good.thnx:))
İnsaf Suna
Dilber and Kader: You were good at pronunciation and grammer,but Dilber mispronounced "magnificient".
Emine and Pınar: You should have presented place without saying your names. It was a good video and related to nature of the historical programs.
çgdem &insaf: good chosen words. good intonation and pronunciation ( especially çigdem) thanks:)
DLBER & KADER : it was a good video apart from a few mistakes. pay more attention to intonation:) thanks, friends.
EMİNE& PINAR : the start of the video wasnt so good. it was unnecessary. a good place to introduce thanks:)
insaf and çiğdem:ı liked your video ıt is good especially çiğdem you spoke very fluently.ıntonation was also good.
kader and dilber: your intonation a bit poor but apart from this your video generally good especially good pronunciation.
emine and pınar:generally ıt is a good video except from some unneccessery things such as saying your names...
insaf & çiğdem: girls, you have really good intonation especially ciğdem you. Your organization could have been better, but it is also good to give sufficient information about the topic. Pay attention to the pronunciation of 'civilization'.
kader & dilber: Girls, your topic really attracted me as you mentioned about my hometown. You could have paid more attention to the intonation thinking that your topic requires this. Anyway it is good and informative video.
emine & pınar: Girls, it is like a backstage video I tihnk you should first introduce the topic with your faces. You have good intonation and pronunciation but your video is not like a historical program. Anyway good job. Thnx:) Pınar IŞIK
emine & pınar:friend I think you should show your face at the beginnin of the your speech or end of your speech.you spoke fuently and use good intonation.
insaf & çiğdem: I think the best one is your video because you prepared your videos so attractive and also you spoke well.
İNSAF and ÇİĞDEM: An attractive topic. Çiğdem spoke fluently and her intonation was very good. Also İnsaf spoke well. İt is clear that you paid attention to the intonation. As a whole I like your video very much.
DİLBER and KADER: Your video is related to the topic and you spoke fluently. it is an interesting idea to give information about this monastery.
PINAR and EMİNE: Interesting topic but I didn't like the beginning and finishing. Also if only you had showed yourself in the beginning. Good intonation.
insaf and çiğdem: that was a good job, both your pronunciation and intonation good. I liked emine's way of speaking.
Dilber and kader:I think you made a good preparation beforehand.ı liked your video.that was suitable for that section.
Pınar and Emine:what the most important thing is you had paid more attention to the pronunciation.I congratulate you.(nagihan durmaz)
insaf and çiğdem: that was a good job, both your pronunciation and intonation good. I liked emine's way of speaking.
Dilber and kader:I think you made a good preparation beforehand.ı liked your video.that was suitable for that section.
Pınar and Emine:what the most important thing is you had paid more attention to the pronunciation.I congratulate you.(nagihan durmaz)
insaf and çiğdem: that was a good job, both your pronunciation and intonation good. I liked emine's way of speaking.
Dilber and kader:I think you made a good preparation beforehand.ı liked your video.that was suitable for that section.
Pınar and Emine:what the most important thing is you had paid more attention to the pronunciation.I congratulate you.(nagihan durmaz)
insaf&çiğdem:ıt was a good video. your pronunciation and intonation was really good.
dilber&kader:you spoke fluently and your video is very suitable for the topic.
pınar&emine:it could have better if you had showed your face but your pronunciation was really good.
By the way tourists aren't just foreign people, there are also local tourists.(Pınar IŞIK)
Kader Balkıs:
İnsaf and Çiğdem: Your intonation was really good, friends. ı think you represented the nature of historical programs. thanks
Pınar and Emine: there were a few pronunciation mistakes. I think you should have paid more attention to your video.
ebru saygılı:
İNSAF AND ÇİGDEM: girl! your video it is realted to topic. generally, you are good
DİLBER AND KADER: you could use better intonation and pronunciation. thanks
PINAR nad EMİNE: I wish I saw your faces. but, your work generally, is good
Tuğba Ulunç ide106_02
çiğdem and insaf hi friends, your topic is interesting. The speech is good. you are careful with the pronunciation and intonation,but there is a mistake in pronunciation of "civilization." anyway, thnx..
Dilber&Kader you would find a better topic but you use proper language. thnx..
emine and pınar hi friends, I'm sure you studied hard, but you should improve your intonation and pronunciation. thnx..
Tuğba Ulunç ide106_02
çiğdem and insaf hi friends, your topic is interesting. The speech is good. you are careful with the pronunciation and intonation,but there is a mistake in pronunciation of "civilization." anyway, thnx..
Dilber&Kader you would find a better topic but you use proper language. thnx..
emine and pınar hi friends, I'm sure you studied hard, but you should improve your intonation and pronunciation. thnx..
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