http://www.youtube.com/watch?v
This is the second cartoon video by Ahmet A and Filiz from section 1.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9QA_DLd50Zk
This is the third cartoon video by Kemal and Ayse Nur from section 1.
http://video.google.com/videoplay?docid=2432907568047716264&hl=en
37 comments:
okan uzgörmez ide106-2
for Fulya, Ramazan & Koray
good work friends, your sentence intonation is very good, and your pronunciation is also good. An enjoyable video!
thanks!
for Ahmet & Filiz
there are some pronnciation mistakes (continue, conversation)
your sentence intonation could be improved.
for Kemal and Aysenur
your sentence intonation and pronunciation are good, however your could choose much simple words for children (childish words).
fulya ramazan and koray: congratulations friends. your intonation was succesful. you reflected the natue of this typpe of programmes in a good way.
ahmet a and filiz: your video was succesful too.however you should improve your intonation skills.in my opinion,your video would have been better if you hadn't chosen a video which had its scenario under the screen.
kemal and ayşe:your video was good in terms of pronuncation(only one mistake ear),intonation and grammar. congratulations!
EZGI ULUC IDE106_1
FULYA RAMAZAN & KORAY: You are very successful.I enjoyed so much when I was watching u. the words you have chosen are suitable for children program and ypur sentence intonation is very very good. your song itsy bitsy spider is wonderful.good job friends congratulations.
AHMET FİLİZ:
filiz's sentence intonation is good and ahmet's sentence intonation could be better and your pronunciation is good except for a few mistakes(conversation) it is a good idea to make a cartoon but you could chose a better video for this and you could give effects on it.thank u friends.
AYSENUR AND KEMAL: I agree with okan you could choose simpler words so that our audiences(childrens) can understand u easily. your grammar and intonation is good.thank u your effort.
Serpil Fırat-ide106-2
For Fulya-Ramazan-Koray:
It was an enjoyable video.The pronunciation was better and you have chosen simple words.Everything was OK!Good Luck!!
For Filiz-Ahmet:
The intonaiton of Filiz was good, but Ahmet should be careful.I wish we could see u on the scene. Good Luck!
For Ayşenur- Kemal:
The intonaiton and the pronunciation were good.You are successful.Good Luck!!
koray 106-1
for filiz ahmet
your video is good but there some mistakes in your sentence intonation, but they are not very important.
for ayse nur and kemal
your sentence intonations are good but you could have chosen more simple words.
AY�E NUR KAYA ide106_01
AHMET F�L�Z
It is good idea to choose a cartoon is diffrent but It would be better to choose more entertaining video.Also, you should have spoken more lively in order to attract attention.There are some pronunciation mistakes'conversation, ahead, continue.'Thank you friends:))
FULYA RAMAZAN KORAY
It was an enjoyable video and it is suitable one in terms of children programs.Your sentence intonation is good.I want to add something, while singing, Ramazan is the most dominant. Mostly I hear his voice.Thank you friends:))
Aytün Türkmen
ide106_01
For Ramazan,Fulya and Koray:It is a very good performance.It was very enjoyable for me.It is a real children programme.Congratulations friends..
For Ahmet and Filiz: You are creative.It is really different video.Your sentence intonation could be improved.There is some pronunciation mistakes such as "can't, ahead".Thanks your effort friends..
For Ayşe Nur and Kemal: You are successful friends.Your language is simple and understandable.It is a good example of a children programme.It is pleasure for me to work with you..Congratulations my lovely friends:)
ide106-2 Feriha Gürbüz
Fulya, Koray, Ramazan: Hi guys, ur program is very nice, good intonation...A good educational kid's program...Thx
Ahmet&Filiz: Hi friends, first, thx for ur effort...Ur video will be better with better intonation and be careful about pronunciation of 'ahead', and the words ending -ing...Bye...
Ayşenur&Kemal: Hi friends, ur video is suitable to the concept, it will be better with better intonation. It is very educational...Thx, bye...
yasmin abdulkerim ide 106-02:
fulya,koray,ramazan:
your pronunciation and fluency was very good guys.
ahmet,filiz:
ı think the story should have been more meaningful and educational.you should use your intonation and some music would be good for the programme.
kemal,ayşenur:
guys please pronounce the sound(th)correctly.your subject and intonation was good.
for ramazan fulya and koray: your video is enjoyable so interesting for children. your pronunciation and intonation is good the song is a good idea for the program thanks good luck
for ahmet and filiz: it is good but I cannot understand if the voice belongs to you or not if so, you are really successful.thanks. good luck
for ayşenur and kemal: it is good ayşenur be careful about "look up in the mirror" not "up" "at" other things are good the music is also good and enjoyable thanks.. good luck...
VOLKAN TAYİZ
For Fulya Koray and Ramazan:
It is a good video.their intonations are balso good.Meanwhile they are teaching new term like "lend sb ear".The song is good. thanks.
For Kemal and Ayşenur:
They are trying to pronunce as the children could understand.It is a good point, but they could make the video more enjoyable.However, it is good.thanks.
For Ahmet and Filiz:
It is good but they can do something themselves instead of choosing a cartoon.They must be careful about the phonetics like conversation.Thanks.
Nahide Koca ide106_2
FULYA RAMAZAN & KORAY: Your pronunciation and fluency was very good. Your video is enjoyable so interesting for children.
AHMET&FİLİZ: The story should have been more meaningful and educational. You should use your intonation and some music would be good for the programme. Thanks:)
AYSENUR&KEMAL: Ayşenur should be careful about "look up in the mirror" not "up" "at" You could choose simpler words so that our audiences(childrens) can understand you easily. And also; you should choose a different topic from us, so it would be creative, I think :(
RAMAZAN ABADAN
For Kemal and Ayşenur:
The program is teaching something but most of it is a classical information. They are trying to pronunce like a child.However, as a child program, it is good.
For Ahmet and Filiz:
They are vocalising a cartoon and while doing this they are making some phonetic mistakes and their speeches is are limited so they could make the conversation long a bit.thanks.
Yelda Suiçmez:
for fulya,ramazan and koray's video
your video is very entertainig and educative because the word coice very good. your sentence intonation so successful especially koray's.thanks friends your performance.
Yelda Suiçmez:
AHMET&FİLİZ's video:
the subject of the video was different but sentence intonations could be improved.also there were some pronunciation mistakes such as ' continue,conversation'.ıt was enjoyable.thanks friends for your effort:)
Yelda Suiçmez:
for kemal and ayşenur's video:
in my mind,your video was very beneficial for kids.the subjects which you chose wre educative.but the word could be more easy.they wre a bit hard for kids to understand and learn.ıt was very entertaining.thanks friends.
Fulya Eslek
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Ayşe Nur & Kemal
It!s an interesting and enjoyable video.Their sentence intonations are very good.But they pronounce "regularly,concentrate,success,lives possible" in a wrong way."I can't believing my eyes" this sentence should be rewritten.The content is good.It's ab educational video.Thank you.
Ahmet & Filiz
It is a different video."conversation,continue.about and around" are pronounced incorrectly.Their sentence intonation could be improved.Thank you.
Fulya Eslek
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Yasmin & Serpil
It is a good video.They seem very energetic and sympathetic.Their facial expressions and sentence intonations are very successful. Thank you...
Emre & Volkan
It's a different video.It's an educational one."again" is pronounced in a wrong way.Thank you...
Nahide & Tuğba
They should speak clearly and slowly as it is a children program.Their sentence intonation and pronunciation are good.Thank you.
Fulya,Koray&Ramazan hi friends, your video is entertaining. Intonations and pronunciations are good, but I think , it would be better. Thanks..
Ahmet&Filiz hi friends, your intonations are good, but I didn’t find it creative. I think, you should careful with the pronunciations of the words “ahead “,”chandeliers”. Good luck..
Ayşenur&Kemal hi friends , I saw that your video was very similar to ours. I wonder , whose idea it is. Anyway, I think, the flow of the speech is not clear enough, but your intonations are good. It would be better if you had said “keep clean” not “clear”. You should be careful with the pronunciations of some words such as “regularly” and “concantrate”. And also, you said “entertainment topic “ “entertaining” is better. Thanks..
nuray akyol: for a ramazan koray and fulya: it is a creative video. your intonations are good, it is a suitable video for the children, but there is a mistake with the pronunciation of the'excellent' good luckk....
for filiz and ahmet: thank you for your video. it could have been more creative, you must be careful with the pronunciation of some words such as' conversation' anyway, good luck...
for ayşenur and kemal:it is a creative and educative video. it is a suitable for the children. thank you...
For Kemal&Ayşe Nur: Their puppet show is very good because, they choose good place and good topic. Also, their sentence intonation is suitable for this video.
For Ahmet A.&Filiz: Their cartoon video is good because they use grammar in a correct way moreover, they are very fluent.
Fulya,Ramazan&Koray: This group choose good topic and they use suitable place for their video. They use sentence intonation suitable for children program.
Kader Balkıs:
Fulya, Ramazan and Koray; it was very creative. your song was wonderful. a real children program.
Ahmet and Filiz; if you had paid more attention to intonation, it would be better.
Kemal and Ayşe; your intonation was good. good job
fulya & ramazan &koray:guys, your video is perfect. Everything is prepared in a suıtable way. Your pronuncıatıon and intonatıon are good
ahmet & fıliz: Your intonatıon could have been better, but you chose a different topic. good job:)
ayşenur & kemal: I liked your video. Your intonatıon is effective. (sezen)
İnsaf Suna
Fulya, Ramazan and Koray: Your topic was good and you made a good video because of several reasons such as your intonation, pronunciation and speech style.
Ahmet and Filiz: You mispronounced some words such as about, conservation etc. beside this, you should have paid more attention to intonation. It was not a bad video despite these. Thanks.
Kemal and Ayşenur: Ayşe and Kemal, please be carreful about the pronunciation of regularly and some other words. Your sentence intonation was good and everything was clear . Thanks.
ayşenur and kemal: ıt is an enjoyable video you chose sişmple words that is suitable for your programme.ç your intonation is very good ıt is like a real tv programme.
FATMA KOMURCU IDE106_01;
FOR FULYA,RAMAZAN AND KORAY;
this is a good video.their pronunciation is good.the video is entertaining enough for kids.thanks...
FOR AHMET AND FILIZ;
the video is generally goo.ahmet should be careful about pronunciation of words such as "conversation".filiz speaks very well.thanks....
FOR KEMAL AND AYSENUR;
the environment seems very nice :) they speak well and entertaining.thanks...
Fulya-Ramazan-Koray: Hi, friends!The content is good and enjoyable for children.You were good at pronunciation and intonation.Thanks for your effort:))
Ahmet-Filiz: Hi, friends!You were creative.You could have been better at intonation.Apart from some pronunciation mistakes, it was generally a good video.
Ayşenur-Kemal: Hi, friends!You were good at pronunciation and intonation.The content was good.Thanks for your effort:))
Tuğba DEMİREL IDE 106_03
Ayşenur and Kemal: Guys, it is suitable video for children and I like it very much. Good intonation and pronunciation. Thanks:)
fulya&ramazan&koray:your video is really suitable for the children.your pronunciation is good.
ahmet&filiz:apart from some pronunciaiton mistakes, itwas good in general
ayşenur&kemal:your video is really enjoyable and your intonation is really good.
Kemal and Ayse Nur : �t is so enjoyable.�t ie relevant to topic.and you use good sentence intonation
KEMAL; AYSENUR: it was a related video thanks:
AHMET; FILIZ: generally it was good but pay more attentıon to intonatıon frıends thanks
FULYA RAMAZN KORAY : ıt was a really good video in terms of pronunciatıon, intonatıon thanks:
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KEMAL; AYSENUR: it was a related video thanks:
AHMET; FILIZ: generally it was good but pay more attentıon to intonatıon frıends thanks
FULYA RAMAZN KORAY : ıt was a really good video in terms of pronunciatıon, intonatıon thanks:
_Fulya, Ramazan & Koray: I liked it. It is suitable 4 the topic. There are good sentences which is stressed that is good.
_Ahmet & Filiz: Guys, it is a good video but the intonation and the proper tone could be used in a better way especially Ahmet.
_Aysenur & Kemal: This video is creative I think the words chosen are suitable.
ebru saygılı:
ayse and kemal: your video is good.it related ro topic.
ebru saygılı:
fulya and ramazan: your intaonation and pronunciaiton are good
ahmet and filiz: I like your video in terms of intonation.
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