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This is the second news video by Hacer,Ceren and Muhittin from section 3.
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This is the third news video by Zehra and Ümmühan from section 3.
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This is the fourth news video by Fatih and Lütfiye from section 3.
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44 comments:
FATMA KOMURCU_01;
For Ebru and Hale;
transitions between the news are not used enough and the organization f the program could be better.they are careful about the pronunciation and the sentence intonation.thanks....
FATMA KOMURCU_01;
For Hacer,Ceren and Muhittin;
hacer speaks fluently.Ceren doesn't behave like a presenter, she should have stayed constant in her place.Muhittin could speak much more.however, it was generally good.thanks...
FATA KOMURCU_01;
For Zehra and Ummuhan;
both speak fluently and are careful about the pronunciation,but the faces of presenters cannot be seen clearly.giving different kinds of news is a good idea.thanks...
FATMA KOMURUCU_01;
For Fatih and Lutfiye;
the fluency could be improved.both speak with a good pronunciation and the atmosphere is suitable for news.tahnks...
yasmin abdülkerim ide 106-02:
hale,ebru:
the first speaker could be more fluent and she pronounced (cause)incorrectly.the second speaker was good in fluency and pronunciation.
hacer,ceren,muhittin:
you were good in pronunciation,fluency but yur pair work was not equal.muhittin could speak more.
zehra,ümmühan:
you were good in pronunciation and fluency but i wish i could see your faces:)
fatih,lütfiye:
fatih should imrove his pronunciation and fluency.lütfiye was good in pronunciation and fluency.
IDE_106_1 EZGi ULUC
EBRU AND HALE:
it seems that they studied hard because their pronunciation and sentence intonation is good.however they should study on filling gaps and transitions between the news. thank u.
HACER CEREN MUHITTIN:
hacer's sentence intonationis very very good and she uses her voice well. but cern doesn't behaves like a news speaker she shakes. muhittin speaks fluently. thank u for this nice video.
ebru and hale you are good but I am not sure about "blood streets" and the expression "good morning everyone" anyway you are good good luck
hi friends hacer ceren muhittin you are good and your speeches are fluent. thanks and good luck
zehra and ümmühan you are good especially your costumes are realy suitable for the program thanks good luck your pronunciation is good, too
fatih and lütfiye you are good too but be careful about the word "battery" thanks good luck
IDE_106_1 EZGi ULUC
ZEHRA AND UMMUHAN:
if only we could see your faces:) your sentence intonation and pronunciation is good.
FATIH LUTFIYE:
both of your pronunciation is good and u speak fluently. fatih could be better in pronunciation.thank u friends.
Nahide Koca ide106_02
Fatih and Lütfiye: You are good too but be careful about the word "battery" thanks..
Ebru and hale: You must have studied very hard because your pronunciation and fluency are very good.
hacer,ceren,muhittin:
you were good in pronunciation,
fluency but your pair work was not equal.muhittin could speak more.
zehra,ümmühan:
you were good in pronunciation and fluency.if only we could see your faces:) your sentence intonation and pronunciation is good.
friends I like your news videos. It is related to the topic. each one of you is well-prepared as I see.
Especially I like zehra,ümmühan,muhittin,hacer and ceren. your style of speaking is according to the news program. you are also good at sentence intonation and pronunciation. hale, you spoke a bit fast. but you paid attention to pronunciation.
fatih, you should be better at sentence intonation. there are some pauses and hesitation in your speech. but you are also good. thanks.
ebru and lütfiye also paid attention to pronunciation.
I want to add that I find ümmühan and zehra's video very creative. because they present all kinds of news by giving their nature. ıt is good idea.
I apreciate all of your works, thanks friends:)
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zehra and ümmehan:girls you did a good job:)the video is relevant to the topic.yuour pronunciation and intonation is good.costumes are suitable.thanks...
ebru and hale:you must have studied hard friends.pronunciation and intonation are good.thanks...
fatih and lütfiye:fluency could be better but it is generally good.pronunciation is ok.good luck...
ceren muhittin and hacer:it is generally a good video.fluency is ok.pronunciation is good.it seems you are well-prepared.good luck...
İnsaf Suna:
Ebru and Hale: Ebru did not speak fluently, and Hale made some pronunciation mistakes such as government, restaurant. Apart from those, you were good.
Ceren-Muhiittin-Hacer: All of you spoke in a good way, but Ceren mispronounced "said".
Fatih-Lütfiye: Fatih should have spoken in a more fluent way, and in the end he shouldn't have said bye bye. Lütfiye was generally good.
Ümmühan-Zehra:Both of you should have spoken equally. Ümmühan spoke more than Zehra and Ümmühan mispronounced "said". It was good in terms of words you used and contents of your video.
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Ebru-Hale: You could have spoken more fluently.
Fatih-Lütfiye: You should pay more attention to intonation and fluency. good job........
Ceren-Muhittin-Hacer: ıt was a good video. you all spoke fluently,but sometmes I couldn't understand you because of the video.
Zehra-Ümmühan: You spoke for several titles in a good way. I liked your vocabulary.
Ayşe Nur ide106_01
Fatih Lütfiye
Both of you are fluent but you could be more active. Your pronunciation is generally correct.However; to me, it is not suitable to close the news program saying bye bye. Thank you friends:)
Ayşe Nur ide106_01
It is a good video. You are fluent especially Hacer pays attention to sentence intonation and pronunciation.Thank you friends..
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Zehra Ümmühan
Both of you are fluent.Also, it is good idea to give information about weather forecast.It is different from the other videos. However; you should pay attention to sentence intonation and to me,it is not suitable to use 'etc'. Also, the atmosphere is not so bright.Thank you friends...
hale and ebru: They seem to have memorized the text,especially Ebru. However,their pronuncation and grammar usage is good.Generally,it is good.
hacer,muhittin and ceren: They used good phrases such as you're welcome,that's pleasure. Also,their video is like a real news programme. Congratulations to them!
ümmühan and zehra: Their video is a creative one. They choosed all kinds of news programmes to act which was a good idea.They were succesful about pronuncation and grammar usage also. Congratulations'
fatih and lütfiye: Their video is good but they could have been more creative.Pronuncation of Lütfiye is good but Fatih should improve it. Generally,it is good.
zehra&ümmühan:Girls, this video is very good. You show us every kind of news programmes and it is a good idea. Your pronunciation and grammar are also good.Thank you..
lütfiye&fatih: Well, it was a nice video but I think it could be better if you presented it more lively.
ceren&hacer&muhittin: Guys, the way you present the programme is very successful and you spoke fluently but I think ceren shouldn't have swung:)
hale&ebru: Girls, I liked your sentence intonation, pronuncation and the transition you used for the next news but you looked at your paper often, apart from this it was nice.
zehra&ümmühan:Girls, this video is very good. You show us every kind of news programmes and it is a good idea. Your pronunciation and grammar are also good.Thank you..
lütfiye&fatih: Well, it was a nice video but I think it could be better if you presented it more lively.
ceren&hacer&muhittin: Guys, the way you present the programme is very successful and you spoke fluently but I think ceren shouldn't have swung:)
hale&ebru: Girls, I liked your sentence intonation, pronuncation and the transition you used for the next news but you looked at your paper often, apart from this it was nice.
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EBRU and HALE: You could have paid attention to transition between the news. And you could have been more creative. Also it is related to your topic. Generally, it is a good video.
MUHİTTİN,CEREN AND HACER: Generally I liked your video. I enjoy your ways of speaking. All of you are speaking fluently and your pronunciations are good. But there is a problem in the organization.
ZEHRA AND ÜMMEHAN: It was a striking news. I like your intonation very much. You speak like a real announcer but I think you forget to use your body language. For example you could have used your hands. Generally I enjoy the organization.
FATİH AND LÜTFİYE: It is a good video but you could have spoken more fluently. And it is a bit dull video. But your news are interesting.
zehra%ümmühan: I liked your video very much. by giving different news, you showed your creativty and your intonation was very good.
hale& ebru:your intonation and pronunciation was good.
fatih& lütfiye: lütfiye spoke fluently and your intonation was good. fatih could be better if he spoke more fluently.
ceren%hacer&muhittin:ın general it was a good video. you spoke fluently and pronunciation was very good.
hale & ebru: your pronuncıaton and intonation are very good, but your organızatıon could have been better. You didn't make your transitions in a smooth way.
fatih & lütfiye: your words and intonation are good, but you present it in a bit monotous way.
hacer&muhittin&ceren: I liked the style of your speaking, each one of you speaks fluently paying attention to the intonation, especially hacer
ümmühan&zehra: your news programme is very very good, girls.Your pronunciation and intonation are very effective.(sezen)
EBRU&HALE: Both of them often looked at the papers in front of them. Their voice was clear. Also, their pronunciation and intonation were good. In general, it was good.
MUHİTTİN-HACER-CEREN: They spoke fluently. There were a few grammar mistakes such as "shouldn't got". The word choice was good as well.
FATİH&LÜTFİYE: I liked their video. But, they should pay more attention to pronunciation. They used a good grammar. Congratulations!
ebru& hale: There weren't many grammatical mistakes in the sentences they used. It was clear and easy to follow, but they should have finished the program more effectively by paying attention to intonations at the end of last sentence.
muhittin& ceren: Which ı liked most in this video is its beginning, because it is very effective and they cared for the intonations enough.There is a good correlation between Muhittin and Ceren. thanks.
zehra& ümmühan: The sentences they use are well-selected and I think it is a prominent work in terms of pronounciations and intonations.
lütfiye & fatih: It was a good program however it would surely be better if they had spoken a bit fluently. There aren't so many grammatical mistakes. Thanks a lot..
hale and ebru: I like your video girls.Your intonation and pronunciation were all good.
muhittin,ceren,hacer: they made some grmattical mistakes however you spoke fluently.
ümmehan and zehra: you made agood job.you intonation and pronunciation were good; however you did not use you body language effectively.
fatih and lütfiye:your video was good,It was relevant,If you pay much more heed to intonation I think it would be much more better (nagihan durmaz)
_Ebru & HaLe: It is a good video,but it could been betterif the intonation was used in a better way which releveant to the news topic.
_Muhittin_Ceren & Hacer: It is a good video, good order I think. (ceren you must be nervous you couldn't stand still :)) Intonation is appropiate for news concept.
_Zehra & Ümmehan : _Best of The Week_ Introduction of the video is appropriate for the news atmosphere. They both used the tone of their speech suitable for the news. Congratulations!!
_Lütfiye & Fatih: This video has a different topic which is good but it could be better if they tried to attract attention especially fatih, but not bad.
ebru-hale: guys, I liked your video. It is related to news programs and it has the nature of real news prog. your pronunciation and intonation are appropriate for the your news.
hacer-ceren-muhittin: your news is different. You speak fluently paying attention to pronunciation and intonation. Good job...
�mmehan-zehra: It is a different topic.you use some photos related to your news. It is creative also, you speak fluenly and intonation is suitable. Thanks, guys.(l�tfiye)
lütfiye- fatih= They succeeded in a good job. their pronunciation and intonation good. but, fatih made a mistake; he couldn't have said 'bye bye' at end of news.
muhittin, hacer and ceren= Their speakings are fluent. They used the transitions related to news. It is good.
ümmehan and zehra= yes, girls, you are creative because you used different things. their topic is very fantastic. ın addition, you paid attention to your intonaiton and pronunciation. (ebru........)
LTFY&FATH :except for the pronunciatıon of bye bye, it was good. well prepared and well chosen stories. thanks:)
ZHRA&UMMHN:ıt was a well prepared video. your speech was also good but it seemed that it was an audio news.thanks :)
CRN&MHTTN&HACR: Your speech is fluent and your pronunciatıon is also good.but you should have shared your works equally.thanks:)
�mm�han and zehra:you did a good job girls. your intonations and especially pronunciations are very good as well as your choice of words.the best think I like in this video is your content.it includes different kinds of news.you are well prepared .thanks.
ebru and hale:you are also well prepared.apart from some pronunciation mistakes your intonation is good.but ebru you should speak fluently.thanks girls.
l�tfiye and fatih:you are good at intonation and pronunciation but fatih should speak more fluently.you are well prepared thanks guys. HACER
ZEHRA&ÜMMÜHAN: (The reason why I commented about your vidoe late is that I couldn't open your video.) I liked your video very much. You used a good grammar. And your pronunciation and intonation were good as well. You were like native speakers. Congratulations!!!(ALİ UZTOPAL)
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for ebru and hale's news video
you can ımprove your body language.also you could use video clıps to make the news more clear.the choıce of language,formal language,was rıght for the news.thaks frıends.
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for hacer,ceren and muhittin's news video
all of you spoke fluently.pronunciatıons of the words were used ın a rıght way and succcessfuly.ı thınk the structure 'enjoy yourself' was not convenıent for the news.the envıroment used as a news studıo was decorated succcesfully.thanks frıends.
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for zehra and ümmühan's news video
fırstly,your costumes were perfect.also the subject of your fırst news was very dıfferent and real.announciıng the sport news and weather forceast were very creatıve.I enjoyed much whıle watchıng all your news.pronunciatıon and sentence ıntonatıons were succcessful.thank you frıends for your effort.
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for fatıh and lutfıye's news video:
your news was very benefıcıal for us.because we all make the same mıstakes about the usage of batteries.you can ıprove your fluency.but pronunciatıons of the words were rıght.thank you for your news.
Fatih& Lütfiye: Except the pauses Fatih had during his speech the video is good. I like it.
Ebru& Hale: Good sentence intonation but it sounds as if it's monotonous.thnxs
Hacer, Ceren, Muhittin: Good story guys,You are speaking spontaneously. All in all, Rules are Rules...
Hale&Ebru: you have got a good sentence intonation. on the other hand, your video sounds as it is ameteurish and monotonous.
Ümmühan&Zehra: I liked your video. there was agood intonation and the visual effects you have used help your video to be more understandable.
Fatih&Lütfiye: your video was informative and beneficial for us. you have a good sentence intonation.(muhittin)
ebru and hale:their intonation were good but I think they should speak more flunently.
Hacer,Ceren and Muhittin :They spoke flently, generally they were good.It resembel a news programme.
Zehra and Ümmühan : It looked like a real news program. They spoke fluently and used good intonation.
Fatih and Lütfiye : They should speak more fleuntly but it was related to topic.Generally they were good.
ıde 106_02 nuray akyol:
for hale and ebru: thank you for your video. you have a mistake in the pronunciation of 'government' you could have spoken a bit fluently. thank you...
for muhittin hacer and ceren: it is a good work; your video is convenient for the concept, but you can use some visual videos. thank you
for fatih and lütfiye: fatih could have spoken more fluently, but you have no pronunciation mistakes. it is a good job. thank you
Ebru-Hale: Generally, it was a good video.Ebru could have spoken more fluently in some parts.Hale was better in fluency and intonation.Thanks for your effort:))
Ceren-Hacer-Muhittin: Hi, guys!!you were good at pronunciation, intonation and fluency.It was a good video.I liked it.Thanks...
Ümmehan-Zehra: Hi girls!Your video is a good one.The way you presented news was very good.You paid attention to intonation, pronunciation and grammar.Thanks:))
Lütfiye-Fatih: Hi, guys!Generally you did a good job but there was a problem with intonation and fluency in some parts.Thanks for your effort:))
Tuğba DEMİREL IDE 106_03
zehra & ümmehan: It is really a good job girls except from the technical problems. You were
effective in terms of pronunciation and intonation. I admire your creativity.
fatih & lütfiye: friends, firstly thanks for ur attention to the pronunciation. I learnt the correct pronunciation of "industry", for example. I think you should have been more confident and fluent.
muhittin&ceren&hacer: friends, you did a good job. It is an equal group work and I liked your confidence.
ebru & hale: Girls, I think you should at least add some photos or short videos related to your words. It wasn't an effective news program. However, you were careful about pronunciation. Good. (Pınar IŞIK)
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