Saturday, March 29, 2008

IDE 106_01, Travel

This is the first travel video by Fatma and Ahmet from section 1.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nLw4BNPHiSM


This is the second travel video by Filiz and Ezgi from section 1.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4Zrxsk3YApo


This is the third travel video by Burcin, Seray and Asli from section 1.
http://video.google.com/videoplay?docid=7213797372077110390

44 comments:

filizyldz said...

this video is very good.congratulations.fatma is speaking fluently but if she used her body language well it would be better.ahmet's intonation is good.

filizyldz said...

asl�seray and bu�in's video is good. all of them speak fluently especially asl� is very successful this time and her her pronunciation is very good.

Anonymous said...

FULYA ESLEK
ide106-01
Ahmet & Fatma:
They are very successful.Their pronunciation are good.The content and vocabulary are effective.They speak fluently.Ahmet's sentence intonation s perfect.Unfortunately,I had some difficulties while I was listening them because of the noise coming from outside.Thank you.

Filiz & Ezgi:
Their video is good.They speak clearly.On the other hand, while the photos are on the screen,they don't speak.They should have told something about them.Attractive is pronounced in a wrong way.Filiz used her body language effectively.Thank you.

Anonymous said...

FULYA ESLEK
ide106-01
Burçin.Seray and Aslı:
They speak fluently.The content is good.They give clear instruction about the hotel.There is a grammatical mistake in this sentence:''There are a number of parks,cartoon.... and also baby... is available.Thank you.

merwe said...

hi friends:))

ahmet and fatma: your video is very good.I liked it very much.you spoke fluently and while you are showing the scenes,giving information about them is a very good idea.I couldn't hear any pronunciation mistake.congratulations:))

filiz and ezgi : your video is also good.you spoke in a clear way.you did your best,too.thnx for this good video:))

burçin,seray and aslı: It is a good video,too.you spoke in a clear way but the sound can't be understood ver well because of the noise of the outside.there are some pronunciation mistakes. thnx friends:)

Anonymous said...

FULYA ESLEK
ide106-01

Şahin & Mislina:
Both of them speak clearly.The content is very good.They give clear instruction about the place.They are successful.Thank you.

Nuray & Merve:
It is a good video.They speak fluently.Their pronunciation is very good.They give a lot of information about the hotel.It is a marvellous hotel.Grammatical accuracy is good.They are well-prepared.Thank you.


Güler & Feriha:
They are very successful.They speak clearly.Their pronunciation and sentence intonation are very good.They give a lot of information about the mosque and church.They are well-prepared.Grammatical accuracy is very good.Thank you.

Anonymous said...

FULYA ESLEK
ide106-01

Şahin & Mislina:
Both of them speak clearly.The content is very good.They give clear instruction about the place.They are successful.Thank you.

Nuray & Merve:
It is a good video.They speak fluently.Their pronunciation is very good.They give a lot of information about the hotel.It is a marvellous hotel.Grammatical accuracy is good.They are well-prepared.Thank you.


Güler & Feriha:
They are very successful.They speak clearly.Their pronunciation and sentence intonation are very good.They give a lot of information about the mosque and church.They are well-prepared.Grammatical accuracy is very good.Thank you.

Anonymous said...

FULYA ESLEK
ide106-01

Ali & Can:
The first speaker speaks very fast,and he pronounces '' lovely,Mediterranean'' incorrectly.He repeats '' It's... '' so often that this makes his speech boring.However, they give clear instruction about the places.The places are very attractive.Thank you.

Burhan & Ceren:
They are successful.They speak fluently.They give clear instruction about Adana.Grammatical accuracy is good.Thank you.

Murat & Tuğba:
It's a good video,but because of the sounds of waves It's difficult to listen them.They give clear instruction about Kız Kalesi.They speak fluently.Unfortunately,'' another'' is pronounced incorrectly.Thank you.

Sezen & Mehmet:
There are some words pronounced incorrectly:
especially,apart,opportunity,basketball,volleyball,another.On the other hand they speak fluently.They use their body language effectively.Their sentence intonation is good.Thank you.

tuğçe said...

fatma and ahmet: It is a successful video.both of you speak fluently,especially ahmet.tnx for your effort friends.

filiz and ezgi: filiz uses her body language efficiently.your pronunciation is good.thank you.

bur�in, seray asl� your video is good also. Apart from some grammatical mistakes it is a successful one.thank you.

Anonymous said...

ide 106-2 okan
for ahmet and fatma
ahmet speaks fluently and pronounces the words correctly, fatma also speaks fluently.
you are so creative,
both of you use sentence intonation effectively.

Anonymous said...

ide 106-2 okan
for filiz and ezgi
you are succusful to make the video enjoyable. both of you speak fluently and pronounce the words correctly.

Anonymous said...

ide 106-2 okan
for seray and aslı
it is an enjoyable video you use the sentence intonation effectively,
and pronounce the words correctly.

özge said...

fatma and ahmet: Their video is poor in terms of intonation. Their speech was monotonous. They should improve this topic. However,that was a nice video,anyway.

filiz and ezgi: They are both succesful. However,Ezgi would have been more lively. Anyway,that was a succesful video. Congratulations to them!

burçin,seray and aslı: Your video was nice but Burçin and Aslı would have been more lively. Gİving the names,even the operator, at the end of the video was a nice idea. Congrtaulations to them!

Anonymous said...

Emre DEVECİ
Fatma&Ahmet
Video was good, especially Ahmet's pronunciation was good Fatma was also good but she should have used her body language more efficently.

Filiz&Ezgi
Video was good, speakers spoke fluently.They described Beypazarı very effectively but unfortunately body language was not efficient.

Anonymous said...

Emre DEVECİ
Burçin&Seray&Aslı
their video was good they used good adjectives for describing hotel.Both of them were good and roles were shared equally, I mean, there was no dominant speakers. their prunciation was also good and Burçin ,as helping role, he was good and his speech embellish the video.

Anonymous said...

Ayşe Nur ide106_01
Fatma Ahmet
Both of you are fluent especially Ahmet speaks as if he was a native speaker:), but he speaks in the same tone. it would be better to speak more lively.Thanks friends:)

Anonymous said...

RAMAZAN ABADAN ide 106-1

To AHMET and FATMA:
They chose a good place to describe. They are talking about the important information about the place. Ahmet use his voice very well as a narrator. Fatma is also good but she should be careful about the pronunciation.good job.

To FİLİZ and EZGİ:
Filiz uses a very good body language. Introducing a place and talking about the food is a good point for their work.Ezgi says "one hundred year before cell phones". This is very nice.good job.

To SERAY, ASLI and BURÇİN:
The form of the speech is convenient for three of them:talking to an owner of a hotel and talking to a tourist. They are good;however, Aslı could use more attractive adjectives as an owner.Burçin is also good but in my opinion, he should be more careful about speaking fluently.Thanks.

Anonymous said...

Ayşe Nur ide106_01
Filiz Ezgi
Both of you are succesful.You speak fluently and pronounce the words correctly.In fact, normally Ezgi smiles a lot but she is very serious in this program. I think she is a bit excited:) thanks:)

Anonymous said...

Ayşe Nur ide 106_01
Aslı Seray Burçin
It is a succesful video.Each one of them pronounces the words correctly.However, Aslı should be more persuasive owner and she should use more cogent words as an owner. also, the owner should be more active while she is introducing the properties of hotel in terms of convincibility.I want to add something.( Aslı smiles very sincerly:)Thanks friends:)

Anonymous said...

Hi Friends!
For Seray&Aslı:
Thank u so much for this entertaining video. I admire your pronuncation and your being well-prepared for this video.Aslı u are good but I think with your beuty you should speak much more=)Seray u are also good.You used ur body language in a positive way and u are relaxed.Good LUCK!!

For Filiz&Ezgi:
Filiz could use body language more effectively, I want u to show us more about Beypazarı.Especially, while the photographs were being shown, u should have used a good song.Anyway, u both are perfect.
Good Luck!
For Ahmet&Fatma:
Ahmet u are perfect and I think it is a good place for us.You used important and interesting characterists of the place.Fatma is also good, but she should used her body language much more.Good Luck!

SERPİL FIRAT

Anonymous said...

Nahide Koca ide106_2

For Filiz&Ezgi:Filiz uses a very good body language. Ezgi says "one hundred year before cell phones".Ezgi would have been more lively. Anyway,that was a succesful video. Thanx..

For Fatma&Ahmet:Their video is poor in terms of intonation. They seak so monotoun. They shoul improve ttha topic.

For Burçin&Seray&Aslı: They used good adjectives for describing hotel. Your video was nice but Burçin and Aslı would have been more lively. there are some pronunciation mistakes. Thnx friends:)

Anonymous said...

yasmin abdulkerim ide 106-02:
ahmet,fatma:
it was a good job but i could not hear clearly.
ezgi,filiz:
they both speak fluently and their pronunciation was good.it was agood job.
seray,aslı:
you both speak flently your pronunciation is good.it is a good job.

Anonymous said...

tu�ba ulun� ide 106_02
ali& can your pronunciations are generally good. I think you should use modals more effectively.
burhan&ceren your video is really funny. your pronunciations are good. it is good to use gestures.thanks..
tu�ba&murat hi friends because of the sound of wave I couldn't hear your voice clearly, but you speak fluently. thanks..
sezen & mehmet you speak fluently but � think you should be careful with the pronunciations of "area" and programme.good luck..

Anonymous said...

yelda sui�mez
for asl�bur�in and seray video
the video is very successful.also all of you spoke fluently.the context of the program was beneficial.mehmet has �mproved his pronunciat�on and sentence �ntonat�ons a lot.also,the mus�c of the video was so nice.thanks your successful v�deo.

Anonymous said...

Yelda SU��MEZ
for ahmet and fatma"s video
�t was very very successful travel program so I could not f�nd any m�stakes �n terms of pronunciat�on,�ntonat�on and grammat�cal.fatma seems as if she were a real travel.�t was creat�ve �dea.the mus�c also was very good.ahmet"s sound was so effect�ve.I enjoyed very much wh�le watch�ng the v�deo.also I have learned lots of th�ng about the h�story of soli thanks to your v�deo.you were very successful.thnks.

Anonymous said...

Asli OZGEN
İDE 106_1

for fatma and ahmet:
hi,friends.you are perfect.you spoke fluently and your pronuncation is good.it is suitable for this topic.thanks friens.it is a very good job.thanks friends.it is clear that you are well-prepared.




for ezgi and filiz:
first of all,it is a good job.you are successful.thanks friends.

Anonymous said...

for ahmet and fatma
hi friends the contex is very suitable for a travel program. your sentence intonation is very good. there is a mistake about the word "civilization". thnx

for ezgi and filiz
your video is also good and introducuing beypazarı as if you were there is a creative idea. filiz uses her body language very good and they speak in a clear way.you did your best,too.thnx for this good video:))

for seray burcin and aslı
we saw the hotel from other aspects which is good. you act very natural and it seems such a normal day for you. your sentence intonation is good but there are some pronunciation mistakes. hope you ll correct them. thanx by:)

Anonymous said...

AYTÜN TÜRKMEN
ide106_01
For Fatma and Ahmet: I felt as if I had watched a real travel program.It is successful so much.Ahmet uses sentence intonation effectively.Fatma speaks fluently but she could use body language.I liked the video. Thnx friends.

For Seray,Aslı and Burçin: I liked video so much.I enjoyed very much.you speak fluently.Burçin made some pronunciation mistakes.Aslı made repetition of "also".But all you are successful.you introduced hotel successfully. Congratulations friends.

For Ezgi and Filiz: You speak fluently.It is clear that you studied so much.Filiz uses her body language effectively.Congratulations.

Anonymous said...

yelda suicmez
for ezgi and filiz's video
both of them spoke fluently.pronunciatıons and sentence intonatıons were used effectively.also filiz used her body language very well.thanks frıend thıs well-prepared travel program.

Anonymous said...

EZGI ULUC IDE 106_01

FATMA AND AHMET:I wish we had seen ahmet more in the video ; but, he talks fluently and his pronunciation is good. Fatma's pronunciation is good as well.However she could use her body language more effectively. She says " absolutely breathtaking" and it is good for this topic.

SERAY, ASLI AND BURCiN:
I wish we had seen Aslı and Burcin more in the video.Because, Seray is more dominant than my other friends. All of them talk fluently and their pronunciations are good. (except for "during") and there are some mistakes for example "are you enjoying....?" and " introduce to soli" it should be "introduce soli to you". Aslı says "a rich variety of meals" and it is suitable for this kind of topic.thanks.

Anonymous said...

Ahmet KARAKUL İDE 106_01

Seray&Aslı&Burcin

hi friends, first of all your acting ability is wonderful. Seray uses body language effectively. There are some pronunciation mistakes but on the whole the video is a good sample for travel program. this summer I will stay in Soli Hotel:) I hope it's really as good as you announced. :) 10x

Ezgi&Filiz
Hi friends, your video is really enjoyable. Filiz is good at body language and she speaks {sometimes reads:)} fluently. ın addition Ezgi has a clear voice yet she should pay more attention to body language. 10x

Anonymous said...

FATMA KOMURCU IDE106_01;

ASLI,SERAY AND BURCIN;
All of my friends seem active.they usesuitable structures for this kind of program.the environment is very nice. however;thre are some pronunciation and grammer mistakes.also, Burcin could speak much more.generally it is good.thanks...

FILIZ AND EZGI;
Both of my friends speak fluently.filiz pronounces "turkey" wrong and ezgi says builded.these are the small mistakes. they use good structures such as one hundred years before cell phones,a rich variety of deserts and meals..and baklava seems so delicious:))))

Anonymous said...

fatma & ahmet: your pronunciation and intonation are good, but you could have used your body language more effectively.

aslı & seray & burcin: your travel program is successful. your sentence intonation is good but there are some pronunciation mistakes.

ezgi&filiz: you speak fluently and especıally filiz used her body language effectively. good job:))

Mehmet Burçin said...

Fatma&Ahmet: My friends prepared suitable video for their subject. They use grammar in a correct way their video is interesting. There is not any noticeable pronunciation mistake.

Ezgi&Filiz: In this video my friends prepared good content.They use body language effectively.Moreover, Their grammar usage is good.

Mehmet Evliç said...

FATMA and AHMET: It is an interesting video. The information you gave was very good and interesting. You speak fluently.

EZGİ and FİLİZ: This video was interesting and you try to speak fluently but I wish you had used you body language more effectively.

BURÇİN, SERAY and ASLI: Your video is enjoyable. I like it very much. You speak fluently and try to make a good job.

Rapunzel said...

your videos are really good in terms of pronunciation, intonation. you all have good efforts for these videos.Congratulations:)
GÜLÇİN KIVANÇLI
İDE 106_03

Can Çelebi said...

for the firs one: it is very nice. you give good information, but you could be more friendly and spontaneous.

ERDIL said...

fatma and ahmet: is informative in the video,fluency is ok.,
Ezgi and filiz: You could be lively, but the order of video is gfood
Burçin, seray and asli,: This is a good video, the terms are and place are good choice

Anonymous said...

nuray akyol ıde 106_02
for ezgi filiz: thank you for your work. your pronunciation and intonation are good, but Filiz said 'in the same time' I think it should be 'at the sametime' Anyway, good luck...
for fatma and ahmet: your topic is interesting. there is no mistake, but Ahmet could have been as active as fatma. good luck...

Anonymous said...

i could not write any comments for your videos friends, i apologize from you for that reason. as you all know, to introduce someone or somewhere has been familiar with us since our childhood. We all, i guess, have used a camera and always told about a person, some people or somewhere. Therefore, you all are successful and creative. thank you for your work. gülbin.

Anonymous said...

Fatma-Ahmet: Hi, frinds!I liked your video although I had difficulty in understanding some parts because of the wind.You paid attention to intonation, pronunciation and grammar.Good job:))

Ezgi-Filiz: Hi, girls!Your video is a good one but there are some pronunciation mistakes.Vocabulary choice is good.Also your grammar is good.You spoke fluently.Thanks:))

Seray-Aslı-Burçin: Hi, friends!Your video is also good but in some parts you should have paid more attention to the intonation.Pronunciaiton is good.You gave enough information.Thanks:))

Tuğba DEMİREL IDE 106_03

Anonymous said...

İnsaf Suna:
Fatma and Ahmet: Your video reflects the nature of your topic. Your intonations and pronunciations were used in a good way. I couldn't find any mistake related to grammer.

Filiz and Ezgi: Your video was good in may ways such as grammer, pronunciation and intonation but Ezgi could have used her gestures.

Burçin, Seray and Aslı: Seray spoke in a fluent way and was lively. Aslı mispronounced "sure". Burçin and Aslı could have spoken more fluently. All of your pronunciations were good.

Murat Akkoyun said...

ezgi&filiz: you spoke fluently and your intonation was effctive.

fatma&ahmet:ı really liked your video, your video is very relevant to topic and also sentence intonation was good.

aslı&burçin&seray:ıt is a a good informative video.ın general it was good in terms of pronuncaiton.

Anonymous said...

KADER BALKIS:
BURÇİN-SERAY-ASLI: I think you reflected the nature of travel programs. you all were good.
FATMA-AHMET: I think there was no mistake. your intonation was good and it was like a real travel program
FİLİZ-EZGİ: It was generally good , friends. no problem with your intaonation and pronunciation.