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This is the second entertainment video by Dilber and Cigdem from section 3.
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This is the third entertainment video by Emine and Kader from section 3.
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62 comments:
yasmin abdulkerim 106-02:
insaf,kader:
kader has some pronunciation mistakes such as (interview,influence) and also insaf should be careful about (special).
dilber,çiğdem:
çiğdem pronounced(fashion)and dilber (things)incorrectly.the fluency was good.you were prepared very well.
insaf and p�nar: There are some problems about your pronunciation and especially intonation.(major,interview)are problems.
dilber and �i�dem: Your pronunciation is good. You must have studied hard.tnx friends.
nuray akyol ıde 106 _02
for dilber and çiğdem: it is a good work. your intonations are good. thank you. good luck...
tuğba ulunç ıde 106_02
for dilber and çiğdem:
hi friends. it is a well-prepared video.you should be careful with the pronunciation of fashion. good luck...
Nahide Koca ide106_02
For insaf and pınar:
There are some problems with your pronunciations and intonations.
For Dilber and Çigdem:
You prepared well. Your intonations are good. Thanks:)
insaf&pınar: your video was very good except few pronunciation mistakes such us interview. you spoke fluently and your intonation was good and you reflected the nature of fashion properly enough.
dilber&çiğdem: you prepared very well, I liked your intonation. çiğdem's pronunciation was really good. ın short, you did a good job:)
Okan UZGÖRMEZ IDE 106-02
for Insaf and Pınar
except from some mistakes your pronunciation skill is good.
you sometimes stop while speaking but I think that you are well prepared.
thank you!
Okan UZGÖRMEZ IDE 106-02
for Dilber and Cigdem
you speak fluently and your pronunciation is good.
your sentence intonation is also good.
thank you!
Okan UZGÖRMEZ IDE 106-02
for Tuğce and Volkan
Hi friends, you are well prepared and I find your pronunciation very good.
you speak fluently and you cooperate well.
Thank you!
Okan UZGÖRMEZ IDE 106-02
For Yasemin and Tuğba
you are so creative, and you speak fluently enough.
there are some grammatical mistakes.
your pronunciation is well done. Good work
Thank you!
nuray akyol ıde 106_02
for insaf and pınar:
hi friends. you have mistakes with the pronunciations of 'influece,interwiev and fashion' good luck...
Ayt�n T�rkmen ide106-01
For Tu�ba and Yasmin: You are very creative,friends.it is good work.You speak fluently and you are careful about the pronunciation.The using of new words about fashion is good.thanks.
For Tu�e and Volkan: You use a lot of adjectives and it is impressive.you speak fluently.There is almost no pronunciation mistake.thnks..
For Emre and Serpil: You speak fluently.there isn't any grammatical mistake.the video is a good example for fashion program.thanks friends..
Aytün Türkmen ide106_01
For Insaf and Pınar:You should study the pronunciation.You made many pronunciation mistakes.Except these you are good friends.thanks..
For Dilber and Çiğdem: You speak fluently.Sentence intonation is very good.it is clear that you studied a lot.thnks friends..
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ide 106_1
for INSAF and PINAR
There are some pronuncation mistakes but you are good.thanks friends
for DILBER and CIGDEM
it is clear that you are well prepared.thanks friends for this video
Fulya ide106-01
İnsaf and Pınar:
Their pronunciation and sentence intonaton could be improved.They did not speak lively.
Fulya ide106-01
Dilber and Çiğdem:
It is a cerative video.''prefer'' is pronounced in a wrong way.However, ''.. so decided to go'' could be improved
guler: for p�nar and insaf... it is good,, thaks for your effort... good luck friends...
guler: for dilber and cigdem... thanks that is good study... good luck for the other presentations...
guler: for emine and kader... you use "by the way.I especially wonder. one minute." that is good. thanks good luck... friends...
EZGi ULUc iDE106_01:
iNSAF AND PINAR: you have problems with the pronunciation of some words like interview.Additionaly hair is not a plural word.tnx for you effort.
DiLBER AND CiGDEM: the adjectives that u use (awesome,bright) are very suitable for this kind of the program.your intonation and pronunciation are very good congratulations.
EMiNE AND KADER: your pronunciation and sentence intonation are good but I had difficulty in understanding some of the things u said.tnx for your effort.
friends(insaf and pinar) pinar you use your voice very effectively i've felt myself as if i watch a foreign video. insaf you seem a bit excited, your pronunciation is very good bur there is a problem with the sound of the camera.for the information i get about hairstyles,thank you:) thank you again for all your work. gülbin
friends(dilber and cigdem) you've done a great work. i've enjoyed your video much:) the adjectives you use are well-chosen. please do not lose your energy. thank you for all your work:) gülbin
friends(emine and kader) your video is very special because i think the context is real. your creativity is wonderful. the adjectives are very important and you use them but please be careful about their pronunciation. (fantastic,...etc.) thank you for all your work. gülbin
(Insaf and Pınar)the nature of the video is proper to the real program and the starting part and ending part of the video are very good.FATIH APAYDIN
insaf and pınar:They both speak fluently. however they made some pronuncation mistakes such as; especially. Showing the photos of different hairstyles was a good idea.
çiğdem and dilber:They chosed right adjectives which indicate the nature of this type of programmes. Also,their pronuncation was good generally.Congratulations to them!
emine and kader: They could have been more lively. However,their pronuncation is succesful.On the other hand,they need to improve intonation.
FATMA KOMURCU IDE106
FOR INSAF AND PINAR;
The presenter pronounces the "interview" wrongly.in a part of the video the guest is speaking as if she is reading the speech.except for these points,the video is good...
FATMA KOMURCU IDE106_01
FOR DILBER AND CIGDEM;
the presenters seem very enthusiastic.they act lively.they are careful about the pronunciation and intonation.the concept of the program is suitable for the fashion programs.congratulations...
FATMA KOMURCU IDE106_01
FOR EMINE AND KADER;
they acts naturally.they speak fluently and don't do many mistakes.generally,it is good...
(cıgdem and dilber)the using of adjectives is veyr good and effective apatr from that pronunciation and intonation are good(fatih apaydın)
çiğdem and dilber:it seems you are wellprepared.your intonation is ok.pronounciation is good.your video is relevant.thank you.
insf and pınar:generally it is good.but you should speak a bit slowly or it seems as if it was memorising.thank you friends.
insaf pınar: friends, you realy studied hard and did a good job, but you should have paid more attention to your pronunciation.
emine kader: girl, it was a good video. you look relaxed and confident. you speak fluently but your intonation could be improved. (çiğdem)
İnsaf&Pınar: In some parts, there is a problem with your voice.Organization is good.The content is relevant and good.However, you could have been better at intonation.
Dilber & Çiğdem: You speak in a lively way which is essential for this kind of program.I liked the way you presented.You were well-prepared.
Kader & Emine: Your fluency is good but you could have been more lively in some parts so that your intonation would be better.The content is good.Generally, it was a good video.
(Tuğba DEMİREL)
PINAR and İNSAF: First of all, there was a problem in the voice of your video. Some parts can't be understood. You made some pronunciation mistakes and you could have spoken a bit fluently. Also I like the content of the video.
ÇİĞDEM and DİLBER: The beginning of the video was interesting. You spoke fluently and your pronunciations were good. Also this video seems a bit short. Generally it is a good job.
EMİNE and KADER: Girls, it is a good video. You are very casual and you tried to speak fluently. In some parts you could have paid more attention to your intonation. This video is related to topic and the content is interesting.
Emine&Kader: it is a good video.you spoke fluently but you should be more careful about your intonation.anyway, you did a good job:)
İnsaf&Pınar: I think you had a problem with sound system. I had difficulty in hearing some words. There were some grammatical mistakes.All an all Good job.
Dilber&Çiğdem: I like this video very much. Good organization and good adjective choices. But we don't say 'sport' we use 'sportic'
Emine&Kader: this video is great. Very good sentence intonation. Thanks girls.
insaf, pınar: you could speak more fluently. you made some pronunciation and grammar mistekes. you used some phrases that show the nature of your video. totally, it is a wellprepared video.
dilber, çiğdem: it was wellprepared, too. çiğdem spoke very spontaneously, and dilber could be more fluent.
kader, emine: it was good video totally. I did not catch so many mistakes. they were spontaneous enough.
İNSAF&PINAR: At a few points, there was a problem with sound. Also, you should pay attention to pronounciation of some words and intonation. In general, it was good. Congratulations Guys.
ÇİĞDEM&DİLBER: I liked your video because it was different from the other ones. You could find the nature of the topic. You used a good grammar and your intonation, pronunciation were good as well.
KADER&EMİNE: On balance, you spoke fluently. But it could have been better if you had spoke a bit calmy.(ALİ UZTOPAL)
İnsaf Suna:
dilber and çiğdem: ıt was a good job. You used pronunciation and grammar in a good way, but you could have used more advanced vocabulary.
kader and emine: ıt was a good work, but it could have been better if you had paid more attention to intonation.You used a good vocabulary which was related to fashion.
EMİNE&KADER: your context is relevant. you seemed relaxed and comfortable, it was good.please be careful about the pronunciation of some words such as interview, fantastic...thanks for your all effort.:)
ÇİGDEM&DİLBER.an enjoyable video. you seemed so dynamic(especially Çiğdem) but it was a bit short, I think. generally, your pronunciations were good but you mispronounced a few words(fashion ) your intonation were also good. thanks for your video:)
PINAR&İNSAF: Generally it was good but please pay more attention to pronunciation and intonation of some words. ınsaf was a bit hesitant.anyway thans for your video:)
insaf- pınar: Friends you made a good job , it was OK except for a few pronounciation mistakes. You should care this problem. thanks.
dilber-çiğdem: Especially the program sounds like a professional one. The sentences you chose were understandalbe and your speech was easy to follow.
emine- kader: The program was well prepared. Let some pronounciation mistakes alone, it could surely be better if you had spoken a bit louder.
(Burhan Demir-IDE-106-03)
KADER BALKIS
insaf and pınar: a good video, but there was a problem related to the voice. you used good words related to the topic, but Pınar could have been more careful about pronunciation.
çiğdem and dilber: your intonation and gestures were good. I liked it . I could not find any mistake.
çiğdem&dilber: This video is very good. You reflected the nature of fashion in a successful way. And adjectives were really good.
insaf&pınar: Girls, the video is nice but there was a problem with the voice. I couldn't understand some parts. It could be better if they have spoken more fluently. They hesitated to talk sometime.
kader&emine:I liked this video but there was just one thing missing. The way you spoke could be more lively. Except from this everything was really good. thnks :)
(CEREN YEŞİL)
İnsaf&pınar: Because of the sound system,some words aren't understandable, but your context and the words you use are good. You could have paid attention to your intonation.
Emine&Kader: Your subject is very enjoyable. It is related to your topic, but it could have been better if you had used up and down in your voice.
Ciğdem&Dilber: Your video is very lively. Your intonation, pronunciation and the words you use are very effective(sezen)
p�nar and insaf it was difficult to understand some parts due to the your voice.especially insaf could be louder. however in terms of fashion program it coul be more dinamic one.
kader and emine � liked your video.you speak in a clear way.
but intonation could be better.
�i�dem and dilber your video as the best you were creative. you used good adjectives. your video was like a real fashion program.
insaf&pınar: your video is related to the topic. there is a problem related to sound so ı was unable to catch on your pronunciation well.
dilber&çiğdem: I liked your video a lot. especially sentence intonation was really good.
emine&kader:your video is also really good in terms of sentence intonation.
GÜLÇİN
insaf&pınar: I liked your fashion video it was related to topic.With more careful intonation, it could have been better but it is good.
çiğdem&dilber:The way you spoke was the nature of a fashion programs,good pronunciation and fluency!
emine&kader:ı liked your fluency and confidence.it was good.(pınar IŞIKTEKİNER)
DiLber and Pınar : The topic is good but the pinar is a little bit stressed. the sound of the video could be improved,, we missed some parts of it..but as fara as the content is concerned, it is not bad.
Çigdem and diLber : The atmosphere is Ok( in speech) intonations are really noteworthy.I Liked it .
Emine and Kader : The speechs are aliitlie bit fast. but the subject chosen is creative one. Intonation is necessary girls :D
hi friends:)
insaf and pınar's video was good but there were some pronunciation mistakes.In general,the video was good.thnx:)
çigdem and dilber's video was a good program.their pronunciation was good.I couldn't hear any mistakes.thnx:)
emine and kader's video was good.I liked the subject but they can care about the intonation.thnx:)
hi friends:)
insaf and pınar's video was good but there were some pronunciation mistakes.In general,the video was good.thnx:)
çigdem and dilber's video was a good program.their pronunciation was good.I couldn't hear any mistakes.thnx:)
emine and kader's video was good.I liked the subject but they can care about the intonation.thnx:)
İnsaf and Pınar Çetinkaya:there is a voice problem in this video.I like pınar'speech.She speak more fluently than the earlier video.İnsaf's speech could be better.Their topic is relevant to topic.
Kader and Emine:They should have spoken more lively.They speak fluently.It is relevant to topic.
insaf-p�nar: I liked your video, but insaf exaggerates intonation in some parts. It reflects the nature of fashion program.
�i�dem-dilber: you have a good job. Intonation is applicable. Also, you speak confidently. In your video, fashion shows are another parts of your of good job.
kader-emine: guys,despite some pronunciation mistakes, your fluent speaking is good.It is appropriate for fashion nature. good job...(L�TF�YE)
insaf and p�nar: hi!!!firends your video is appropraite the nature of fashion; it is good, but there is a problem in your voice.
dilber and �igdem: friends seem energitic:).you succeeded in a good job. your pronunciation and accent are very good. In addition, you speak fluently.
kader and emine: you speak spontaneously and there is no problem in your intonation.generelly, it is good.
İNSAF&PINAR:the content and the words is suitable for your topic.you could be more fluent and be careful about intonation.because of the voice problem I could not get the pronunciation.
ÇİĞDEM&DİLBER:your video is a good one.pronunciation and intonation is good.you are fluent and spontaneous. well-prepared job.
EMİNE&KADER:your content is relevant to your topic.your pronunciation and intonation is also good.you are fluent.good job.thank you.HACER
yasmin abdulkerim ide 106-02:
emine,kader:
the pronunciation and fluency was good.it was agood job.
Ayşe Nur ide106_01
Emine Kader
Both of you seem comfartable and you are fluent. I liked your content. It is relevant and interesting video. Thank you friends.
Dilber Çiğdem
Both of you are fluent especially the first speaker and she uses her body languege well.It is good idea to tell her experience.thanks...
Ayşe Nur ide106_01
Pınar Insaf
Both of you are fluent. Also your content is relevant and both of you seem comfartable Good job. thank you friends
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ınsaf and pınar's video.
generally,your pronunciatıons were rıght but please watch out the fluency and sentence ıntonatıons whıle speakıng.also the subject of the video was dıfferent and benefıcıal.thanks your vıdeo.
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for dılber and çiğdem's video:
your effort was perfect.and the vıdeo was very very nıce ın terms of subject,musıc and vıdeo qualıty.both of you used your body language effectıvely.also body language and sentence ıntonatıons used ın a rıght way and successfuly.thanks frıends.
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for emıne and kader's vıdeo:
thıs vıdeo was a succesfull example of ıntervıew.you can be more actıve. ı thınk.durıng the ıntervıew.there were no grammatıcal mıstakes.also sentence ıntonatıons were successful.thanks frıends for your effort.
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for tuba and yasemın's vıdeo:
yasemın looks very nıce ın thıs weddıng dress.also both of them spoke fluently.there were nı grammatıcal and pronuncıatıon mıstakes.but tuba can ımprove her body language.goıng to there and descrıbıng the weddıng dress ın that envıroment were so creatıve ıdeas.thanks frıend for your performance.
nuray akyol ıde 106_02
for emine and kader: it is a good work, but you could have been more creative. emine said 'bye bye' ı think it is a wrong usage. thanx
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