http://www.youtube.com/watch?v
This is the second video about food programs by section 3.
http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=nxWdP8uDGig
This is the third video about food programs by section 3.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oS4y1aR125E
http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=nxWdP8uDGig
22 comments:
ıt is a good work
they spoke in a good way.this video attracted me and it was very diffrent work.
they made a good job and they spoke fluently and clearly.
DİLBER DİNÇER
that video is absolutely good good job girls.
you made a good job, friends:)you spoke flunetly and I couldn't hear any pronunciation mistake.I hope youu will do better jobs:)thnx..
it was a good presentation except some pronunciation mistakes with the sounds(W) it was pronounced as (v) and (the) as (d).your fluency was good.
yasmin abdulkerim ide 106_02:
çiğdem,emel:
the flency was good and also the pronunciation.
insaf,kader:
(w)was pronounced as(v).(the)was not pronounced correctly.fluency was good.pair work was good.
dilber,pınar:
the fluncy could be better.the video is too long.the pronunciation is good.
cigdem and emine
Quality of the sound and video could be improved but different from the others in terms of creavitiy..it was difficult to understand but apart from these, it was good.. I liked it (ErdiL İçten)
insaf and kader
It is a good job..in terms of intonation and mimics ( insaf : of course :D and 'by the way')
video reflects the atmosphere of a food show.. Thanx ErdiL İçten
dilber and pinar
there must be ups&down in speech.. intonation could be improved.. it is just known ordinary recipe ..I want to watch sth different and creavity..Good pronunciation. It is good for the first video but must be improved (ErdiL İçten)
I liked their video because it was a real food recipe. Speaking about garlic while they were explaining ingredients of spaghetti make their program more enjoyable. It already seems they were jubilant during it. Although there were a few grammatical mistakes, their pronunciation was good, their voice was audible. As general it was a good job.( çiğdem)
çiğdem and emine:They were good at speaking et fluently and olso creativitiy.
insaf and kader: They spoke fluently and lively so they could keep my attention.It was a good job.
İnsaf Suna
Çiğdem adn Emine: I think that your voice is unclear and there is a problem about the video. You made a different video and thanks to this it was enjoyable for me to watch.
Dilber and Pına: I could not hear what you said clearly. Pınar spoke more than Dilber. You could have been more creative.
emine and çiğdem: Their video has a story in addition to the food recipe,which is a really good idea. I think the only problem in this video is their voice. I was not able to comprehend exactly whether they pronounced the words right or wrong. As far as I listened, I was not able to catch any grammar mistake. That was generally a good video.
insaf and kader: Their video is succesful in terms of acting skills. They acted as if they were really masters of food making. In my opinion;they didn't memorize it.They talked spontaneously. If we talk about weak point, we can mention their grammar mistakes; such as "it must wonderful" should be "it must be wonderful".As we consider that this is their first video, we can mention about this video as succesful.
pınar and dilber: I think there is a problem about voice in this video because their mouths are not in accordance with their voices.They made some pronuncation mistakes such as:clue. However, they gave the recipe in a detailed and spontaneous way, which was a good point. In general, I think they can enhance their qualtity of performance in their next videos.
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pınar& dilber: Firstly, I liked that you gave your recipe in details, but I think despite clear instructions and explaining how to make it step by step, it was better, if you had spoken some different things. If you had made a spontaneous conversation like İnsaf and Kader, it could have turned a perfect job.(çiğdem)
emine & ciğdem:Apart from the quality of the voice, everything was very perfect. Making something for Valentine's Day was creative. You were good in terms of pronunciation and grammatical accuracy. In general, your video was very funny.
insaf & kader:I think that they held a sincere conversation in this video. They tried to speak in a spontaneous way. In general, I liked it, but they should have behaved as if there were people watching them. Sometimes,they could have looked at the camera to establish communication with them, but they looked only at the beginning and end
pınar & dilber: think that they held a sincere conversation in this video. They tried to speak in a spontaneous way. In general, I liked it, but they should have behaved as if there were people watching them. Sometimes,they could have looked at the camera to establish communication with them, but they looked only at the beginning and end
Çiğdem-Emine: Except the quality of the voice, it's a good and funny video.You are good at pronunciation and grammar.What I liked most in your video is the microphone:)))
Kader-İnsaf: I liked your video because you talked spontaneously. While making spaghetti, you talked about garlic. It made the video look like a real food programme, but you sould have looked at the camera sometimes. Your pronunciation is good.Thanks...
Pınar-Dilber: You just tell how to make macaroni. It would have been better if you had talked about different things while making it. It lacks creativity. Your pronunciation is generally good.
Tuğba DEMİREL IDE 106_03
dilber & pınar: First,the good thing was that you explained how to prepare the meal step by step. You voice wasn't audible enough, I wasn't able to follow some parts. You could add some more conversation about different topics.You just talked about the meal. I liked your pronunciation and as a pair you were good.
insaf & kader:I really liked your video girls. It was enjoyable to watch. You made a good pair work in harmony.Especially the intonation remarks of İnsaf was effective.They were both like a real food program makers. Your conversations and the spontaneous way you speak showed the nature of food programs clearly.However,I could catch one mistake not "up you to" but "up to you". Congratulations...
çiğdem & emine: Apart from some technical problems,I mean unclear voice, it is a good video. As a pair there isn't equal work. I like the way they speak fluently and spontaneously.Good job.
(Pınar IŞIK)
The instructions of making maccaroni cheese was explained effectively. Your voice tone was in the same level. Your pronunciation was good. If you had spoken not only about you recipe but also other things,I think your video would have been much more interesting. All in all it was a good job.(nagihan)
I think you manage to give the nature of real food programs.I realy appreciate your video. Except for a few mistakes such as thanks to... not thank to..I think you skipped an significant detail by not looking at the camera. However it was good job.there may be people who try to make your spaghetti thaks to the your convincing voice.(nagihan)
I think you manage to give the nature of real food programs.I realy appreciate your video. Except for a few mistakes such as thanks to... not thank to..I think you skipped an significant detail by not looking at the camera. However it was good job.there may be people who try to make your spaghetti thaks to the your convincing voice.(nagihan)
çigdem and Emine:Although I like their way of acting out I fall difficulty in understanding what they are saying. Çiğdem was very active than Emine. I mean that she spoke much more than Emine. I really enjoyed while I was watching. (nagihan)
çiğdem&emine:it is a creative video. your sentence intonation çiğdem was really good,ı liked also your pronunciation.
kader&insaf:it was an informative video. you seemed very comfortable and your intonation was good.
pınar&dilber:your video was good but it could have been better if you had talked about anything else.ın general it was good.you did a good job:)
KADER BALKIS
Çiğdem-Emine: the video was enjoyable. I liked it, but I could not understand what they said. You made a different video, and thanks to this it was enjoyable for me to watch.
Dilber-Pınar: The video was not clear enough to listen, so ı could not hear what you said. Pınar spoke more than Dilber. I think you both spoke spontaneously. Although this was your first video, it was good.
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